I think since the location change has improved the title sequence a lot. The shots of the white screen contrast really nicely against the colours in the house and this helps to separate the two different locations to make it clear that it is cutting to and from her getting ready and then to her actually seducing this man.
There are scenes that I am not content with such as the mid shot of the lipstick being tapped and chosen . This is because it appears too slow and uninteresting and it doesn't really have relevance within the title sequence since we were in able to isolate the colours in the black and white shots. Therefore, the colour of lipstick that she chooses isn't visible. As well as this, the lipsticks don't fill the frame, so I think for this shot to have worked there would have needed to be more then 5 lipsticks. However, I think the topography was incorporated excellently in this shot.
I also think the blood dripping shot shouldn't be included since that was the very first time we shot and the lighting was uneven. Moreover, it doesn't demonstrate our abilities since it hasn't been perfected and re-shot like the majority of the other scenes. However, it is still a group effort. Therefore, as a group we need to decide whether or not these shots should be included in the final piece.
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