Feedback:

From the class screening on the most recent Edit of our Title Sequence we received feedback of changes that could be made to improve it.

One of the first things that was mentioned was the length of the sequence since it is almost three minutes long and instead should only be roughly two minutes. This means that a lot of shots will need to be cut out of the sequence.

Originally we intended to have interactive typography. However, this proved to be a lot more difficult then it seemed. Since there were only two shots in the film that included interactive text, it didn't have the effect on the audience that we had hoped and it wasn't very prominent within the scene. Therefore, to keep the typography consistent, we are going to remove these shots.

The amount of shots that involved me pulling George around by his tie was picked up upon, Moreover, it will need to be reduced to create a more realistic performance.

The scenes involving the drinks being poured need to be re-filmed so that the performance is more sexual. Therefore, the drink will be poured using only one hand. As well as this, the glasses need to be changed so that two of the same glasses are used. This is to create balance within the frame. It was suggested to use red wine. However, this would make the spiking of the drink less prominent so as a group we have decided against doing this.